[ Angel] Tetsuo Hawejima

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Subject: [ Angel] Tetsuo Hawejima Mon Jan 23, 2012 9:20 pm

Character Profile

Hawejima,Tetsuo

Age: 50
Visual Age: 15
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 150lbs
Affiliation:[/n] Neutral
[b]Rank: Mid-Lieutenent
Loyalty: Self-loyal
World: Kingdom Hearts

Element: Light, Darkness (chaos)
Disease: N/A
Special Field: N/A

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[b]Personality: Tetsuo is a neutral angel, holding loyalty to himself and himself only. He doesn't like to fight unless threatened or unless his family/friends are in trouble. Tetsuo likes to train with his keyblade in order to become better at wielding it.
Nightmares: Tetsuo fears the thought of weakness, he is prideful of his strength and he has nightmares of opponents defeating him with ease. He also has nightmares of not being strong enough to protect his loved ones

History: Tetsuo was a keyblade wielder in the early days of the wars against the heartless. He was taking residence in Twilight Town before the events leading to his demise. When the heartless attacked Twilight Town Tetsuo stood on the front of the attack. He fought valiently, but Maleficent was not about to give up. She sent a doppleganger version of Tetsuo against him (think KH2). The being was spawned from the hate and malice that the heartless had once possessed. In a long and difficult struggle Tetsuo was positive that victory was his. Blinded by his arrogance he left himself off guard. The doppleganger took the opportunity and struck Tetsuo down. As he fell he felt his heart slip away into darkness. While his heart was falling a voice after he heard the voice that his nobles actions has granted him into the gates of heaven. In heaven he became a Leiutenent in heavens army. Until he questioned a generals strategy in a battle and the general banished him to earth.

Roleplay Sample: Tetsuo awoke rapidly as he heard the screams of people outdoors. He swung from his bed and a keyblade materialized in his hand. he ran into a citizen and asked him what was happening.
"Hey what's going on here?"
The citizen told him about the heartless attack and he went out to assist citizens in the defense of the city. He ran and slashed at a group of regular heartless, but it seemed like for every one he cut down, more would spawn. Tetsuo kept fighting, and then all of the sudden a heartless appeared that resembled him. It began to attack him immediately, and Tetsuo blocked every hit. Seeing an opportunity to strike Tetsuo unleashed a furious 4 hit combination that seemingly crippled his enemy. Feeling as if he had won, Tetsuo raised his keyblade above his head and brung it down upon the dopplegangers head. He began to walk away ignorant that the being still lived. Before he could react everything went black.

Subject: Re: [ Angel] Tetsuo Hawejima Mon Jan 23, 2012 9:27 pm

It does not look like you used the code at the bottom of the page. Please do so and fill out all required Fields. Once this profile is made properly, Sangoran will take over as trial.

Subject: Re: [ Angel] Tetsuo Hawejima Wed Jan 25, 2012 9:35 pm

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[b][i]Age:[/i][/b] (How old are you really? 10, 50, 102?)
[b][i]Visual Age:[/i][/b] (How old do you look? 15, 18, 73?)
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[b][i]Affiliation:[/i][/b] (Heaven, Hell, Naruto World, Bleach world, none? Who's side are you on?)
[b][i]Rank:[/i][/b] (Everyone starts out as a low rank, but if your app is good enough, we will let you have a higher one. {Unless stated otherwise by an Admin})
[b][i]Loyalty:[/i][/b] (Good, Evil, Light, Dark, Neutral, yourself, your familly? Who are you Loyal too?)
[b][i]World:[/i][/b] (What "Universe" did you come from? Be it Anime Heaven, Soul Eater, or even Kingdom Hearts, everyone starts somewhere.)

[b][i]Element:[/i][/b] (What Element does your character Possess? There is no limit to the number you can know, but when you first start out, you only get TWO, unless a certain Race/Disease/History allows otherwise. During Special Events, or later in the Future, an "Train for the [Insert Element Here]" could be added to the shop, or a whole new item entirely.)
[b][i]Disease:[/i][/b] (If you have one, be sure to put it in the History. This place refers to the topic in the rule's named 'Diseases'. If you don’t have one, simply put N/A)
[b][i]Special Field (Insert Name Here):[/i][/b] (Some things don't really fall beneath any of these categories, expecially if your from another Universe. Here is were you list those "Things", such as Jutsu Type (Naruto), Flame Attribute (Katekyoo Hitman Reborn), or even Wave Frequency (Soul Eater). You can have as many of these as you like, as long as all are absolutely NECESSARY for your characters. We don't need to know the Flame Attribute for a Soul Eater weapon, do we? We do if you plan on being a hybrid or just want to use that fighting style, but not if you don't plan to do something similar.)

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[b][i]Personality:[/i][/b] (What is your character like? Do they like pocky, dislike training, are lazy? Tell us about your character, and how he/she would act in certain situations.)
[b][i]Nightmares:[/i][/b] (What does your character fear? Chocolate, sweets, friends/familly dieing? Tell us so your friends can help you, and your enemies can tourture you...)

[b][i]History:[/i][/b] (What was your history like? If you are an Angel, please discribe your life, your death, and what you have done sofar in Heaven.)

[b][i]Roleplay Sample:[/i][/b] (Fill this out to give us an idea of your Roleplay. If it is good enough, along with the rest of your app, you can get a higher rank. A staff member will ask you which rank you would like before approval, if it is good enough.)

Subject: Re: [ Angel] Tetsuo Hawejima Wed Jan 25, 2012 11:14 pm

Ok let me start by telling you that this is much better than the sheet from before. Now in the way concerning your history. You said u awoke and became an angel? It seems a bit too vague and opens a lot of questions. Just go a little more in depth about how you became one. Other than that, from a 1st look over, I dont see any other problems with it. If you can fit just that one part I dont see how you couldn't be a high-Lt or low-captain. Thank you and keep up the good work.

Subject: Re: [ Angel] Tetsuo Hawejima Fri Jan 27, 2012 10:55 pm

Ok this is how it goes. I, honestly have no final decision on whether you get approved or what rank you get. Although, IF I were to give my decision of your sheet, I would approve it at rank High - Lt. To put it simply your desriptions were pretty well narrated, but in he case of depth, you need to be as in depth as you showed in your history and sample, to keep yourself at that rank. If you were to keep that up and improve it any over time, I don't see how you couldn't get Low-Captain. In any case, we appreciate your participation in the site and hope to see you as an active member. ^_^

Subject: Re: [ Angel] Tetsuo Hawejima Sun Jan 29, 2012 2:45 am

Oh, were you waiting for a final approval?

Hmm... I'd say keep you at Mid Lt.

Approved~
Azmot

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