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Tetsuo Hawejima
Character name : Tetsuo Hawejima
Clan : n/a
Disease : Not Diseased
Usable Gates : (No Gates Usable ATM)
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons
 Posts : 9
Ryo : 20360
Fist Bump : 0
Age : 30
Location : Earth
Character sheet
Ken:
    (2/2)
Ippō:
(2/2)
Sourupowa:
(20/20)
| | Subject: Tetsuo's First Mission Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:33 pm | |
| As Tetsuo was training with his sword he heard a scream from a child
" What was that ". Tetsuo ran to the little girl that was when he saw a demon underling
" what is a demon doing here" Tetsuo charged toward the demon
" You should be a good snack ". As the demon was about to attack the child Tetsuo charged at the demon
" You okay kid" Tetsuo kept his blade pointed at the demon as he talked to the child.
" yeah I'm okay thanks to you" Tetsuo told the child to get out of here so the child did after saying thanks
" Wonder why a low rank scavenger is here on earth"
The demon looked at Tetsuo and remembered him from when he was a mid lieutenant in heaven's army " Its you the mid-lieutenant of heaven's army Tetsuo Hawejima" the demon was walking back realizing that he could not win against Tetsuo.
" Former cause I got kicked out but I'm still stronger and a low rank demon like you "
As Tetsuo was getting ready to slay the demon the demon shot a dark fireball and Tetsuo cut the attack in half " At least give me a fight and don't back away "
" fine if you want to die so much then so be it " As the demon thought to himself " this is perfect if I kill Tetsuo here and now and bring back his head I will get a promotion and maybe become a lieutenant" The demon then charged at Tetsuo full force and tried to swing and him but kept missing " is this really all of your strength how sad " After hearing that the demon got angry and managed to cut Tetsuo on his cheek only grazing him " don't make fun of me you angel outcast " after Tetsuo heard what the demon said he cut the demons arm off " that is something a low class demon like you should never bring up again " seeing how scared the demon was Tetsuo placed his sword on his back and started to walk away feeling sorry for the demon " I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU "as the demon charged at Tetsuo will full force in blind rage Tetsuo stabbed the demon through his chest " I was trying to be generous and let you live but you threw that chance away " Tetsuo asked the demon who sent him to earth " it was our captian of hell he sent me here to gather more souls so that our army may win " After Tetsuo heard that he said to the demon " thanks for letting me know " and Tetsuo cut the demons head off in a single but blinding fast strike
Last edited by Tetsuo Hawejima on Tue Feb 07, 2012 10:24 am; edited 3 times in total | |
| | | | Ryu Takata
Mid-Captain Class
Character name : Ryu Takata
Clan : None
Disease : Zoanthropica
Usable Gates : Ichiban
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons
Posts : 123
Ryo : 21080
Fist Bump : 0
Age : 30
Location : Heaven/Earth
Character sheet
Ken:
(15/15)
Ippō:
(15/15)
Sourupowa:
(2500/2500)
| | Subject: Re: Tetsuo's First Mission Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:40 pm | |
| Okay I will give you 1 more try, Dialogue is the only colored text, you do not have the requirements to know your sourusodo's true name, or its nickname, right now all your character knows it that it is a sword, This does not look nearly long enough and the demon's speech should be a different color than yours, before you edit this, and/or restart, look at other missions ie one of bakutos recon missions, that should provide a good example of how we conduct roleplay around here. And another thing is you killed the demon without much description of the action. What happened in those 30 minutes, Just fix all this after you see some examples. you have 2 more tries before I trash the mission, and mark it as fail, gl | |
| | | | Ryu Takata
Mid-Captain Class
Character name : Ryu Takata
Clan : None
Disease : Zoanthropica
Usable Gates : Ichiban
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons
Posts : 123
Ryo : 21080
Fist Bump : 0
Age : 30
Location : Heaven/Earth
Character sheet
Ken:
(15/15)
Ippō:
(15/15)
Sourupowa:
(2500/2500)
| | Subject: Re: Tetsuo's First Mission Wed Feb 08, 2012 1:09 am | |
| This is not AMAZING but it works for your first real try. Pass ~Ryu Takata
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