[Hybrid Angel] Sangoran Noado

Race - Hybrid Angel
Name - Sangoran Noado
Age - 21
Visual Age - 17
Height - 5 feet 8 inches
Weight - 141 lbs.
Affiliation - None. Neutral
Rank - Low-captain
Loyalty - Neutral. I am loyal to those i can trust.
World: Shakugan no Shana
Element - Water & Light
Disease - None
Appearance:

Personality - Sangoran does not get along with others when he first meets them. He does become more loyal to his comrades if he deems them trustworthy enough. Sangoran gets very angered when his enemies involve those who are innocent. When given the situation, he can work co-operatively with others, and through this, starts to build trust. Sangoran has a tendancy to get easily angered involving his personal afairs and can hurt those close to him, this causes him to distance himself from other people. With people he does get close with in friendship he shows more emotions then with others.

Nightmares - Fear of Betrayal

History -

When he was 9, Sangoran got into a heated arguement with his father, and was disowned by him. He ran away that night and joined a small group of freelancing assassins. There he learned how to fight, kill, and survive. His weapon of choice is a scythe which is unique by a hidden short sword in the snath of the scythe. This makes it easier for him to kill when defending from an enemy attack or mounting a counter attack. He still uses that very same scythe today.

Over the years, he went around doing freelancing assassinations. When he was 18 he was carrying out an assassination and got ambushed. He fought back as well as he could but he was killed by his partner, whom he had known for 5 years. He was brought back by an angel to seek his retribution on his former partner. The angel even gave sangoran a small amunt of powers of an angel in order to keep him alive. A few months after that, Sangoran got his retribution against the man who killed him. The angel whom had brought Sangoran back to life then tried to kill him. The 2 fought evenly for over 2 hours. Just before Sangoran killed the angel why he attempted to take his life. The angel responds by spitting in his face. Sangoran then decapitates the angel. In doing so Sangoran seemed to gain that angels powers which deveoped his angel powers. He then vows to himself that he will never openly accept anyone to the fullest extent ever again. He now roams around, searching on how to find his resolve.

RP Sample - A boy crossing the desert, wearing a scarf over his face and a heavy trenchcoat, enters a town in the center of the desert. He walks through getting a feel for his surroundings. He then enters a bar and sits down at the counter. He takes off the hood and scarf he had over his mouth and places the scarf in his trenchcoat pocket. The bartender walks over to the boy and leans on the counter, "Hey kid how old are you?" he asked. "I'm 14. What does that mater right now? I can pay your prices so I don't see a reason why i cannot be served?" The boy argued. "The reason i cannot serve you is because your underage." The bartender replied. "Fine then just gimme some ginger ale then >_>" The bartender pours the boy a glass and places it on the table. "So, whats your name kid?" He asked. "It's Sangoran." He replied. "That's quite a unique name there kid. But what brings you all the way out here at your age? And do your parents know your here alone?" "I'm here on a job related reason and i don't have any parents. Besides I don't need em I can survive on my own." The door to the bar opens up and a man in a hat, sunglasses, and a trenchcoat enters and takes a seat next to Sangoran. He pulls out a manilla envelope and places it down on the counter. Sangoran reaches into his trenchcoat and pulls out a stack of money ad places it on the counter. The bartender continues to clean glasses and pretends not to notice whats occuring infront of him right now. The man and Sangoran slide their items to each other and place them into their coats. The man then walks out of the bar. The bartender turns back around and places the glass down. "So, I see that meeting went well? I dont mean to pry but can i know what you just recieved?" He asked, picking up another glass to clean. "I guess so sure. I don't see why not. It is mostly pictures of course and it does concern someone in this town." He pulls out the envelope and opens it up. He pulls out everything inside and spreads it out on the counter. He looks around to make sure nobody is watching and the bartender paces doen the glass he was cleaning. He looks over and picks up a picture and immediately realizes who it is. "This is Augros! He's the towns biggest suppliest. Well not supplies as in my liquor and glasses but information. He gathers it all together for other people to buy from him for various reasons." "Why would he do something like that?" Sangoran asked. "Beats me kid." He looks around and leans in toward Sangoran, "but ill tell you this. If you do have any business with him, I suggest you be very careful. He tends to travel in a pack of bodygaurds all day when he is out." He explains. "No actually I need to find him and ask for a favor. Do you know where to find him?" "Yes he usually hangs down by the fountain in the center of the town." "Thanks." Sangoran gets up off of the chair and turns toward the bartender, "Oh, 2 things. 1) Thank you for all your help. and 2) Can i get a- " The bartender interrupts, "*laughing* The answer is still no Sangoran." "Eh, it was worth a try. Here ya go." Sangoran tosses him a small stack of money. "Keep the change!" He says as he leaves the bar.

An hour later Sangoran comes across the center of the town and finds Augros and a couple of his bodygaurds with him. He walks over and sits down by Augros. "Is your name Augros?" Sangoran asks. "Whos askin?" Augros asks back. "Just a freelancing assassin looking for info and work. I hear your the guy to go to." Sangoran replies. "Well, you've come to the right place kid. Come back here at 11 and we will discuss work." Augros says. Sangoran gets up and walks away. Hours later Sangoran returns to the center of the town and sees Augros sitting in the same chair as he was when Sangoran left. He walks over and shakes him lightly and Augros drops to the ground. Sangoran then notices the knife in the back of Augros' neck. Sangoran suddenly hears footsteps from afar and looks around. He sees a younger man walking across the center o the town, with a sword usheathed. "Who are you and what di you want?" The man asks. "I'm Sangoran and i was here to pretty much do what you already did...that is, if you did it." He relpies. "That man needed to die. Whether it was you or me does not matter now does it? *starts sheathing his sword* So will you leave this town?" He asks. "That depends." He answers. "Do you have a name?" "Yes i do. My name is Neuron. I can tell your on edge at the moment. You don't know if im going ot attack you or not. DOn't worry, it comes woth the profession, but i want to know if you would like to accompany me for a while and do some work with me. What do you say?" He offers. "Hell why not as long as it's going to be fun for me I won't mind. You've got yourself a partner."

Ok, fixed some problems with your profile just to make it easier to read. However, it is still a bit ways away from being finished. A couple notes/suggestions/demands:

1. If you could in the future use the code we provide you, that be boss sauce, ok?

2. We need you to include a picture and/or a description of the character, something you would have found easily had you looked at the code.

3. Add a bit more personality, just seems rather lacking at the moment.

4. We Roleplay in the same, or similar, style that your wrote your history. I understand that you got that from a story your writing, and that you seem to understand the format we do such things (based of how you wrote your history), and simply require you to delete some stuff here and re-arrange some stuff there. Fortunately for you, if you simply move some stuff around, you have a complete Profile! Look around if you need some more help.

5. You say your an Angel Hybrid, ne? A Hybrid of Angel and what?

6. You can add another Element, and I suggest it because they are pretty expensive at the shop.

Just to addon and correct a few things

Your Rank, you don't have to pick it, but if you don't we will pick for you. Keep in mind if you choose, you cannot go over Mid-Captain.

Hybrids are Humans that have died and come back to life. Depending on their actions, powers, and mindsets, they can obtain the powers of Demons or Angels. So, try to explain how you gained Angel powers, instead of Demon powers. Hybrids are special cases, they aren't effected by items that would normally hurt the pure race. (Crosses for Demons, Cursed Items for Angels). But, being human also means you can be swayed in your opinions more than Angels or Demons.

If there is ayny problems with the element combinations let me know cause im pretty sure there wasn.t anything regaurding that, but then again my memory sux sooo.... >_>

ATM, only one thing needs changing. Fix your Rp sample, and your good to go!

Ok i put up that different Rp sample to see if you like it better than my other one. I still have the old one on my desktop incasse its not as good as the original. Any feedback on it is appreciated lol. Thx for takin out the time to lookn over this :)

Excellent sample.

Approved.