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| | [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno | |
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Zabieru Kuroishizno Mid-Lieutenant Class
Character name : Zabieru Kuroishizno
Usable Gates : (No Gates Usable ATM)
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons
Posts : 16 Ryo : 19071 Fist Bump : 0
Character sheet Ken: (4/4) Ippō: (4/4) Sourupowa: (70/70)
| Subject: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sun Oct 23, 2011 7:48 pm | |
| Character Profile Karoishizno, ZabieruHuman form (+ black demonic wings, not shown in pic): Demonic form: Character Basics: Age:223 Visual Age:19 Height:5' 11'Weight: 140lbs Affiliation:N/A Rank: Mid-:t. Loyalty: Neutral Character Other: Personality: Zabieru generally can be a real... well, to put words bluntly, a bitch. The vampire demon is sadistic in his own way; in both mental pain as well as physical. He loves screwing with people's heads. Although by nature he enjoys blood, Zabieru moreover enjoys the method by which it is extracted; hence, sadism. His external mien remains blatantly cold and rather ignorant. He often will charge into things without warning, trying to beat back whatever he can. He battles rather imprudently, which has been a bane to his existence for most of his 223 years. His internal countenance, however, can be rather... erratic. Eccentric, better put. Those who are close enough to reach his core are usually treated with a bit more respect, and can escape his sadistic tendencies, for the most part. Nightmares: >Water Due to previous... incidents. >Large, Public Areas Lack of privacy, too much noise, not many escape routes where you can remain unseen. History: Zabieru was born to a poor family when he was still human. Neither of his parents had purposely conceived him; rather, it was an act that came along with insobriety. Ironically enough, however, soon after they were given the perfect oppurtunity to make money off of their little... mistake. A roaming vampire literally bought the infant of them, and with newly born blood, it was quite a delicacy. However, the child was not left to die. No; he was instead converted by the vampire, Lorenzo, into one of his own. Zabieru lived the next 100 years as his servant to anything the vampire could think of. Unfortunately, this also meant he received sexual abuse, heavily. Zabieru was being driven insane, mentally broken from the abuse thrust upon him, literally, even being a vampire. Lorenzo spent the male until his death, which Lorenzo inflicted after growing tired of his servant. He sold his what was left of his soul to demonic sources, once reaching Hell, and in return, he brought back souls for the demon to which he sold himself to. Lorenzo was the first life he claimed. Distributing all the abuse that had come of him, over the next 100 years, Zabieru continued to claim soul after soul, each time becoming more demonic than before. When the demon was finally satisfied, and even more so than that, he left the democ/vampire to his own devices, with one final lesson. Now realizing that his actions had converted Zabieru into a demon, he taught the male one last, vital thing: how to seek, within himself, for his Sourusodo. What he found was not... sane, either, but served his purposes to every extent; Shimo wa Nageki. Now heavily sadistic, teetering on the edge of insane, and with hundreds of different bloods on his hands, he fled. Zabieru has lived out the last 23 years of his life trying to control his sadistic tendencies, and himself. Through much rigorous tempermentation, he has managed to keep himself, for the most part, fairly sane. Roleplay Sample: (Fill this out to give us an idea of your Roleplay. If it is good enough, along with the rest of your app, you can get a higher rank. A staff member will ask you which rank you would like before approval, if it is good enough.)
Last edited by Zabieru Kuroishizno on Sun Oct 30, 2011 5:48 pm; edited 7 times in total | |
| | | Daisuke Kirai Global Moderator/Mid-Captain
Character name : Daisuke Kirai
Disease : Hemophiliation Usable Gates : Ichiban
Niban
Sanban
Angels/Demons Killed : 1 Angel / 0 Demons
Posts : 192 Ryo : 108784 Fist Bump : 0 Age : 30 Location : Germany
Character sheet Ken: (6/6) Ippō: (3/3) Sourupowa: (1360/1360)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sat Oct 29, 2011 10:34 am | |
| This thread will be moved to the Deceased Character Archives if you will not complete this application within 2 days from now.
There is a 9 day period to finish WIP applications, so you're slowly reaching your limit.
Please, finish your application. If you will not, then I see myself forced to also arrange the deletion of your account. | |
| | | Narora Senoku Founder/Low-General Class
Character name : Narora Senoku
Clan : Senoku
Disease : Hemophiliation Usable Gates : -
Ichiban
Niban
Sanban
Yonban
Goban
Rokuban
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons
Posts : 503 Ryo : 23358 Fist Bump : 1 Age : 29
Character sheet Ken: (227/227) Ippō: (221/221) Sourupowa: (11050/11050)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sun Oct 30, 2011 11:44 am | |
| Your deadline is approching. You have until Halloween night (31st of October) to complete this WIP.
The Deadline ends tomorrow. | |
| | | Daisuke Kirai Global Moderator/Mid-Captain
Character name : Daisuke Kirai
Disease : Hemophiliation Usable Gates : Ichiban
Niban
Sanban
Angels/Demons Killed : 1 Angel / 0 Demons
Posts : 192 Ryo : 108784 Fist Bump : 0 Age : 30 Location : Germany
Character sheet Ken: (6/6) Ippō: (3/3) Sourupowa: (1360/1360)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sun Oct 30, 2011 4:50 pm | |
| I know this app isn't done, but I'm going to give a few hints, as I'm thinking you didn't read the story which this originated from. It's fine, and not neccesary, but I'm simply sparing you time reading this before you go insane from corrections. ^^ (Don't you look angry at me, Naro. I know this kid, he's my friend.) 1. In this forum/story, people usually get a Sourusodo. That's your partner after you've died - a soul in the form of a weapon. It could be a sword, bow, staff, anything. (I personally chose long-sword, and my other character has a Buster Blade. Muhahaha.) Of course, if you haven't officially bit the dust yet, (considering you're a vampire, who are kinda undead...) that also means that you could skip that. But incase you wish to have a Sourusodo, you need to write how you got killed, and simply mention that you got your weapon. No big detail needed there. 2. Usually when you show an appearence, you do a Face Claim. That is, if you use a character face from a different anime, to make sure that no one else will look like you. Simply make a post in the Face Claim thread, it's explained there how it works. ^^ And if it's a random character just made, which doesn't belong to any anime, then it doesn't matter. (It's not like I can tell.) Click me for the Face Claim Thread!3. With the transformation, I'm kinda wondering if he can trigger it whenever he wants to, or if it strains him. Does it take Sourupowa? (Energy) Does it strain his body and cause huge cramps or even immoblilize him? I'd like to know more. 4. Since you didn't place a rank, I'm sure you don't even know what's going on. ^^ I'll simply post a link that explains it. Click me for explanation on Ranks!If you have any questions, PM me. I'd be happy to help. ^^ | |
| | | Zabieru Kuroishizno Mid-Lieutenant Class
Character name : Zabieru Kuroishizno
Usable Gates : (No Gates Usable ATM)
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons
Posts : 16 Ryo : 19071 Fist Bump : 0
Character sheet Ken: (4/4) Ippō: (4/4) Sourupowa: (70/70)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sun Oct 30, 2011 5:37 pm | |
| The transformation is, usually, unintentional, on his part. It takes place when he becomes highly angered, and yes; it does take Sourupowa, though it drains it against his will. It also happens if he goes into an insane rant, or becomes rather... sadistic. | |
| | | Azmot Admin
Character name : Azmot
Clan : Dai-Ruct
Disease : Not Diseased Usable Gates : Ichiban
Niban
Sanban
Yonban
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 4 Demons
Posts : 239 Ryo : 34437 Fist Bump : 3
Character sheet Ken: (61/61) Ippō: (61/61) Sourupowa: (10790/10790)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sun Oct 30, 2011 5:38 pm | |
| APPROVAL TIPS-DAISUKE:
I'm making these just so you have the information, Dai. I am in no way infringing your judgement/skills, but I feel like some of the things you mentioned were not necesarilly wrong, but it is better if you state the following facts in the future if similar problems occur. (P.S I wuv you <3)
1. A member may choose NOT to have a Soursodo if they want a normal weapon, Daisuke, and it does not matter what the usual/normal is. Though a vampire is considered dead, one of two things could have happened. Either he didn't want a soursodo, or he is still a being of physical matter, not one created from spiritual power AKA Sourpowa, thus is unable to wield a Soursodo.
2. For face claim, you are absolutely correct! Also, Zabi, if you wish to just claim a character (Because you a big meany) then you may post there as well.
3. Flawless explanation. However, he is not allowed to post any transformation/power here, that would be placed with Techniques.
4. A member may choose not to place a rank if they wish staff to choose it for him, which is completley acceptable. As it stands, I have a base Idea of what his rank would be, but I will neglect that information from you until it is finished. You are still in complete control of this app, but I call dibs on the next one! | |
| | | Zabieru Kuroishizno Mid-Lieutenant Class
Character name : Zabieru Kuroishizno
Usable Gates : (No Gates Usable ATM)
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons
Posts : 16 Ryo : 19071 Fist Bump : 0
Character sheet Ken: (4/4) Ippō: (4/4) Sourupowa: (70/70)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sun Oct 30, 2011 5:49 pm | |
| Fixed standards of obtaining his Soursodo, hopefully to your liking. Must post to FC now... of nothing..
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| | | Daisuke Kirai Global Moderator/Mid-Captain
Character name : Daisuke Kirai
Disease : Hemophiliation Usable Gates : Ichiban
Niban
Sanban
Angels/Demons Killed : 1 Angel / 0 Demons
Posts : 192 Ryo : 108784 Fist Bump : 0 Age : 30 Location : Germany
Character sheet Ken: (6/6) Ippō: (3/3) Sourupowa: (1360/1360)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sun Oct 30, 2011 6:00 pm | |
| Thanks for the tips, Azmot! This is my first time EVER being a mod so... I'm glad if I didn't completely fail. ^^ 1. And good job, Zabi. As Azmot said (And as I fail) You've got to put the transformation thing as a technique, which you'll later need to buy. (You can get Ryo/money easily. Don't worry.) Click!2. You'll need to make a thread for your Sourusodo, explaining what it is. Click! | |
| | | Zabieru Kuroishizno Mid-Lieutenant Class
Character name : Zabieru Kuroishizno
Usable Gates : (No Gates Usable ATM)
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons
Posts : 16 Ryo : 19071 Fist Bump : 0
Character sheet Ken: (4/4) Ippō: (4/4) Sourupowa: (70/70)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sun Oct 30, 2011 6:05 pm | |
| Okay to both. Ill do the technique at some other point... for now, off to make the Soursodo.
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| | | Daisuke Kirai Global Moderator/Mid-Captain
Character name : Daisuke Kirai
Disease : Hemophiliation Usable Gates : Ichiban
Niban
Sanban
Angels/Demons Killed : 1 Angel / 0 Demons
Posts : 192 Ryo : 108784 Fist Bump : 0 Age : 30 Location : Germany
Character sheet Ken: (6/6) Ippō: (3/3) Sourupowa: (1360/1360)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sun Oct 30, 2011 6:49 pm | |
| App approved. You'll recieve 700 Sourupowa, considering your characters experience and past. I'll change your stats accordingly soon. (Oh, @Az/Naro, move the threads please, I've got no clue how to do that.) | |
| | | Azmot Admin
Character name : Azmot
Clan : Dai-Ruct
Disease : Not Diseased Usable Gates : Ichiban
Niban
Sanban
Yonban
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 4 Demons
Posts : 239 Ryo : 34437 Fist Bump : 3
Character sheet Ken: (61/61) Ippō: (61/61) Sourupowa: (10790/10790)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Sun Oct 30, 2011 7:21 pm | |
| I've chosen his rank, since he has left it blank. Zabi, you will be Mid-Lt.
Even though I do not understand WHY he got an increase in Sourpowa, I will not deny it. Please, though, allow Narora to be informed next time that your doing that. Otherwise, great job! | |
| | | Narora Senoku Founder/Low-General Class
Character name : Narora Senoku
Clan : Senoku
Disease : Hemophiliation Usable Gates : -
Ichiban
Niban
Sanban
Yonban
Goban
Rokuban
Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons
Posts : 503 Ryo : 23358 Fist Bump : 1 Age : 29
Character sheet Ken: (227/227) Ippō: (221/221) Sourupowa: (11050/11050)
| Subject: Re: [Demon/Vampire] Zabieru Karoishizno Mon Oct 31, 2011 5:03 pm | |
| - Daisuke Kirai wrote:
- App approved. You'll recieve 700 Sourupowa, considering your characters experience and past. I'll change your stats accordingly soon. (Oh, @Az/Naro, move the threads please, I've got no clue how to do that.)
Hai hai, i shall move. - Azmot wrote:
- I've chosen his rank, since he has left it blank. Zabi, you will be Mid-Lt.
Even though I do not understand WHY he got an increase in Sourpowa, I will not deny it. Please, though, allow Narora to be informed next time that your doing that. Otherwise, great job! I am curious to this too. 700 Sourupowa reaches into the domain of Low-Captains, if he is a mid-lieutenant, he can have anywhere between 50 and 100 Sourupowa, so i'm wondering if you said 700, but meant 70? Gaining extra Sourupowa from a good app is only possible with a higher rank request (IE, he would need to request a mid-Captain rank.) In other words, his Sourupowa must stay at 70, unless he should request a higher rank. Unfortunately, his app is already approved, so he must make his way up through the ranks on his own. I'll also have to post up a Topic explaining how your stats go up with each rank upon approval of any Apps. | |
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