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 Ryu Takata (Angel)

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Character name : Ryu Takata

Clan : None

Disease : Zoanthropica
Usable Gates : Ichiban

Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons

Male Posts : 123
Ryo : 18722
Fist Bump : 0
Age : 23
Location : Heaven/Earth

Character sheet
Ken:
15/15  (15/15)
Ippō:
15/15  (15/15)
Sourupowa:
2500/2500  (2500/2500)

PostSubject: Ryu Takata (Angel)   Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:04 am

Name: Ryu Takata

Age: 20

Visual Age: 18

Height: 5' 11"

Weight: 165

Appearance:

Affiliation: Heaven

Rank: Mid-Lt.

Loyalty: Kami

World: Kaze no Stigma

Element: Wind

Disease: N/A

Spec. Field: N/A


Personality: Ryu likes to socialize with humans, he feels as if it calms him. Ryu travels between Heaven and earth to obtain his favorite human treat, a dragon-fruit brisk. He rarely loses his temper, but when he does he is impossible to argue with. when it comes to fighting he is all business, When fighting Ryu uses his wind magic to move quickly and slash with a blade formed from the wind. Ryu gets along well with other angels and prefers to stay nonviolent. He will only fight when in serious danger or provoked. Things that make him lose his temper are spilling his Brisk, people attacking his friends, and attacks on humans.

Nightmare(s): Ryu fears the malice of demons. He sometimes has nightmares about being torn into by a pack of demon bunnies (don't ask why). He also has nightmares about his friends being dragged into the abyss by demons.

History: Ryu was a simple guy in life. He balanced work, school and play. He was a star student at his night school, and a valued member of the kendo team. He was a member of the Fuga clan, but left soon after he discovered that something dark was stirring in that family. He changed his name to Takata in order to hide his name. Ryu just wanted a simple life, and for a while that's what he had. He worked at WcDonalds (classic anime copyright protection reference) just trying to support himself. After night school he would typically investigate his old family in an attempt to figure out what they were up to.

A few months into investigating he stumbled upon a crucial piece of information relative to the case. He knew he must present this to the Kannagis at once. Ryu ran as fast as he could to try and warn the Kannagis of the Fugas plan. While he was running he felt a strange sensation come upon him. That sensation quickly turned into a searing pain as he stopped in his tracks. He felt the blood drip from his stomach as his torso separated from the rest of his frame. The light slowly faded from his eyes as he slipped away. All of the sudden he appeared in a strange place. He felt around his stomach only to learn that it was still attached.

What the f... Where am I? Suddenly an echo rings from the surroundings

"Ryu Fuga, or should I say Takata, step forth. Because of your good deeds and your attempt to save lives, you have been rewarded the honor of entering heaven, Ryu paused for a moment.

"wait...Heaven?"

The echo sighed "yes...Heaven. Nevertheless you went out of your way to help someone and you definitely did so for reasons outside of personal interest; so in sight of all of that I grant you entrance into heaven as an Angel.

Suddenly a pair of wings sprout on Ryu's back as his clothes turn white and his hair turns to a light silver, almost white color. Since that moment Ryu has watched over the human race from heaven, paying the occasional visit but never staying long. Little did he know he was about to fight for the race he loved the most and to protect the world. He would enter the breach, the chaos begins.

Rp Sample: Ryu walked down the street with his two female friends from night school Temari, and Haruna. They were both good friends to Ryu and he appreciated them immensely. As they walked down the street they passed a cake shop.

"OMG RYU LOOK...CAKE!!!", Temari screamed. Ryu looked at the shop.

Hey.. would you look at that. You guys wanna go...my treat. Haruna giggled,

"oh Ryu... You're such a good boyfriend". Temari glared at Haruna.

"You're boyfriend..." Haruna grabbed Ryu's arm.

"It's mine" Ryu looked confused.

"wait...it?". The two girls fought over Ryu for half an hour before they finally entered the cake shop. They all sat down to enjoy their treat and laughed and joked for nearly 2 hours before the shopkeeper gave them notice that the store was going to close. Ryu stood up.

"Well guys lets get going" The shopkeeper hands Ryu the bill.

Uhm crap I can't afford this He thought.

"Uhm, shopkeep, I can't afford this". The shopkeep looks at Ryu.

"Don't worry about it, this one is on the house". After leaving Ryu promptly thanks the shopkeep and begins to walk again with Temari and Haruna on either arm.

You know what, maybe this day wasn't that bad after all *Sample End*


Last edited by Azmot on Thu Jan 05, 2012 10:26 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Re-edit done at Administrator request. Hope you like the changes ~Azmot)
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Character name : Azmot

Clan : Dai-Ruct

Disease : Not Diseased
Usable Gates : Ichiban
Niban
Sanban
Yonban

Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 4 Demons

Male Posts : 239
Ryo : 32121
Fist Bump : 3

Character sheet
Ken:
61/61  (61/61)
Ippō:
61/61  (61/61)
Sourupowa:
10790/10790  (10790/10790)

PostSubject: Re: Ryu Takata (Angel)   Mon Jan 02, 2012 8:19 am

A couple things. One, please add more personality and Nightmares (You kinda HAVE to have more than one, don't you? Also, being a demon, why do oyu have fear of losing control?). Two, You can't be from "Assassin's Creed." It's not an Anime. You can be born as an assassin, but no, you can just say from some world/time/place in the world, not a game that we don't support here. And three, your Rp sample needs to be your character. Not some random dude. A side note, we RP in third person here... So do so in your sample.

I have fixed other trivial errors for you. Please do the rest accordingly.
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Character name : Ryu Takata

Clan : None

Disease : Zoanthropica
Usable Gates : Ichiban

Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 0 Demons

Male Posts : 123
Ryo : 18722
Fist Bump : 0
Age : 23
Location : Heaven/Earth

Character sheet
Ken:
15/15  (15/15)
Ippō:
15/15  (15/15)
Sourupowa:
2500/2500  (2500/2500)

PostSubject: Re: Ryu Takata (Angel)   Thu Jan 05, 2012 1:04 am

i edited so please leave what you think on the new sheet

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Character name : Azmot

Clan : Dai-Ruct

Disease : Not Diseased
Usable Gates : Ichiban
Niban
Sanban
Yonban

Angels/Demons Killed : 0 Angels / 4 Demons

Male Posts : 239
Ryo : 32121
Fist Bump : 3

Character sheet
Ken:
61/61  (61/61)
Ippō:
61/61  (61/61)
Sourupowa:
10790/10790  (10790/10790)

PostSubject: Re: Ryu Takata (Angel)   Thu Jan 05, 2012 10:22 pm

Very, VERY much more appropriate. I actually think you will be a valuable member based on your level of not only talent, which is average if not slightly above, but I sense a taste of ambition in your works. A 200% Improvement, I'd say. One thing, though, don't use emotes in RP samples, even if it is well placed and very humorous. Now, your skill is good, but I suggest you look at other posts to understand the kind of thing we do here. One, thoughts are Italicized without quotations, we break apart thought and speech, as well the beggining of speech, into a new paragraph. It makes you look professional and your posts longer :P

~Approved, I will give you High Lt. because of how happy I am with your improvement, as well as the call for it does seem to be there. 250 Units~

A sidenote, I edited your profile so it would be in format, to get you the idea. I hope you don't mind, and I didn't change anything.

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